Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are a lot of people who assume that scientific projects should be surveyed and conducted under the scrutiny of authoritative agencies rather than private entities due to some reasons. However, I totally disapprove of that statement.
It is understandable why many people insist that governments should be responsible for major scientific research instead of individual companies. First, as governments can fund researchers to help them complete their projects in a short period of time without abruptly postponing, people tend to lay their trust in them. Moreover, governments are more reliable in calling on financial support from other organizations in order to help their researchers fulfill scientific projects more effectively and effortlessly. Finally, since a part of funding research, may stem from revenue tax, people want their tax money spent appropriately and under the control of the government.
Though there are some sensible reasons for governments to oversee all scientific research, I am convinced that private entities can also do much better than that. To cite an example, a private corporation based in the United States, whose name is Pfizer, was successful in mass-producing vaccines for Covid-19 in 2021. Noticeably, the company does not belong to its government but is self-reliant. Furthermore, every expert and researcher in that company contributed to finding out a cure for Covid-19 and got recognized by WHO.
To summarize, while many people feel that governments should oversee key scientific research rather than individual firms, I believe that either authoritative agencies or individuals must be in charge of scientific endeavors.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...them complete their projects in a short period of time without abruptly postponing, people ten...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 525, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
...cure for Covid-19 and got recognized by WHO. To summarize, while many people fe...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62598425197 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16117216963 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5219554974 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356304510425 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120649754659 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877106453596 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208894270571 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484854926219 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...them complete their projects in a short period of time without abruptly postponing, people ten...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 525, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
...cure for Covid-19 and got recognized by WHO. To summarize, while many people fe...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62598425197 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16117216963 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5219554974 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356304510425 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120649754659 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877106453596 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208894270571 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484854926219 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.