Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
Many people believe that scientific research should be conducted under the supervision of lawmakers and not commercial enterprises. There is some truth to this belief. To begin with, the restriction may lead to national safety and level playing field. In certain areas like nuclear warfare, weapons and medicine it becomes essential for governments to have a monopoly. Even such control is not without its fair share of risks. War mongering nations and power-hungry terrorists do tend to misuse or abuse such think tanks. The kind of casualties the world experiences is also heart-rending. Similarly, in sectors like pharmaceuticals innovation has always been welcome. Presently, a considerable amount of diseases haunt living beings. Reality is these numbers are only on the rise. So, any scope of progressive study that helps in preventive health care or plugging the symptoms shall be a form of blessing.
Nevertheless, the potential of collective thoughts and competition is undeniable. Private players give a wider variety of skill sets and their profit motive brings in efficiencies. Besides the subject matter experts from different parts of the planet or country is surely not a cheap affair. Furthermore, the kind of capital investment and partnerships that corporates forge or their past lessons learned from global operations are hard to reproduce or replicate. Owing to these factors, it becomes indispensable for countries to allow the free trade in this area too. But for certain sensitive areas, like the ones mentioned above, if any political party instills protectionism it is for the worst. The effect of this is a regressive nation with no advancement in key developmental areas.
- The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling. 78
- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects, while others claim that students should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 84
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 56
- The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2013-2012. 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of difference in income between men and women from 1978 to 2008 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 618, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'pharmaceuticals'' or 'pharmaceutical's'?
Suggestion: pharmaceuticals'; pharmaceutical's
...art-rending. Similarly, in sectors like pharmaceuticals innovation has always been welcome. Pre...
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Line 1, column 857, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that helps in preventive health care or plugging the symptoms shall be a form of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37453183521 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05963398099 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700374531835 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1346392916 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7222222222 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13514209598 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332167980105 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05732747446 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097593333488 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544958556031 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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