Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
scientific research is not easily conducted, not to mention its effect is so immensely influential to people’s life. However, nowadays private companies start to be involved in these researches and even control the whole process. In my opinion, private organisations should not be encouraged to conduct scientific research because it contains unprecedented dangers. therefore, I agree that carrying out scientific research must be in the hands of the governments.
On one hand, private companies are notoriously profit-driven. they might prioritize commercial value rather than the quality of the research. In detail, it is possible that they are willing to fake the results or manipulate the outcome in a way that benefit their profit the most. For example, some expensive drugs manufactured by private enterprises have poor quality but they are still released into the market with fake scientific tests so that those companies can maximize the profit. This can result in numerous dangers to the human body such as malformed births, different kinds of cancers or long-term influence.
On the other hand, since governments are non-commercial authority systems, they usually prioritize social consequences of the research. that means they will let dependable organisations that are under no commercial pressure and in the field of expertise, usually universities, carry out the research. therefore, the result is more partial and less manipulated. Also, expenditure for conducting the research that is crucial to people life can get very desirable. Renewable energy, AI, carbon-free engines stick out to me.
In brief, due to the significant influence of scientific research on human life, it is vital to choose wisely who is capable, neutral and responsible enough to carry out it. Otherwise, it would create severe impacts on generations that are impossible to anticipate. For the reasons mentioned, I believe that governments should be favoured when it comes to conducting scientific research and private companies should have strict limits on carrying out any kind of research.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in brief, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.603125 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08624563335 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4430705868 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.470588235 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313528192638 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907785526364 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808785594705 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187187163033 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886240242583 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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