The first charts shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.
summarise the important by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The first pie chart shows how energy is consumed in an average Australian household and the second one shows how many greenhouse gas emissions are generated as a result.
Looking at the first pie chart, heating seems to use the largest amount of energy than others do, accounting for nearly 50%. energy is consumed much more in water heating and other appliances, compared to all, approximately 30% and 15%. also, the difference between how energy is used in refrigeration and lighting is not too big that we’ve seen a variance of about 3 percent . By contrast, cooling is ranked at the bottom of the scale for consuming the least energy just only at around 2%.
it is water heating that generates the most greenhouse gas emissions, with an approximate percentage of 32% and followed by 28% of other appliances. greenhouse gas emissions from refrigeration use shows a slightly difference in percentage to heating, with just 1% minus. Lastly, lighting and cooling generate the least greenhouse gas emissions, under 10%.
We can see a similarity between heating, water heating and other appliances, they all consume the most energy and generate the most greenhouse gas emissions. However, the order is slightly different. if it is heating that has the highest percentage of energy consumption, it is water heating which owns that place in generating green gas emissions. also, if the difference between heating and other appliances in energy use is quite big (about more than 30%) then it just shows a small variance of 1% in the other. lighting and cooling don’t change in the two pie charts, they all have the lowest percentages of energy use and greenhouse gas emissions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, look, second, so, then, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 965.302439024 151% => OK
No of words: 279.0 196.424390244 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22580645161 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82336280896 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480286738351 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1342632701 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339461619919 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131084801493 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129641912626 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265565212568 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155801047032 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.