many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society.
To what extent do you agree?
Today technology has surrounded people from every core. It has been seen that a bundle of population
admits that communities have adverse affect on social media like Facebook. This essay strongly agrees
with the statement and provides some relative examples.
To begin with, now a times no one has any time for their family instead uploading irrelevant status.
They consider social sites more worthy than spending time with their family. Example People do not
really enjoy the moment but they flaunt by uploading online. Secondly, people have become more
materialistic than ever and demands whatever they see online. However, they have forgotten the real meaning of
being social and meeting people face to face. There are plenty of things which are not good for kids but
there they can excess that with too ease
To continue with, people have become more lethargic by using social media excessively. Primarily, internet
carries huge amount of harmful rays which kill the living beings. For example Many birds do die daily
because of internet waves which transfers through their body. Secondarily, it also effect mentally to the one
who uses it more than specified time. Moreover, excess of everything is dangerous and by using it excessively
they are creating differences among their friends as well as family.
To conclude , in my perspective i opine that parents should should specify the time till which their kids can
excess social media and have a check on that while government should see what is happening wrong on social media
and expelled that from there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29571984436 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39123100055 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618677042802 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3819232884 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2142857143 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145778919842 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506884453168 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309974896795 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442889515169 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486206176437 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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