In today's society, it is believed that women have more influences in raising children compare to men, however, there are arguments that women are better parents than men. While some people argue that men are equally capable in raising children Contrast to women, in my personal opinion, I completly accord with the statement that mother take a major part to nurture their children.
Firstly, women are born to be individuals who have ability to nurture, love and caring. From the early age, women have greater advantage in raising their children, it can be seen from their way of playing, taught morals, good qualties & values like politness, honesty and hardwork. So children has strong foundation & can be easily survived in the democracy society.
Secondly, women have greater role and influences in the growth of their children because during the initial period of children's growth, women are exposed more to the children. When a baby is born, the only way to fulfill their hunger is by breastfeeding which can only be done by women. Furthermore, in our culture, is is essential for women to how to take care of their children from changing diapers to showering the babies and so forth. These type of works rarely done by men. With this strong relationship in the early stage of children's growth, mothers will have greater impact in the adolescent's life. one of great person said that " god could not be everywhere therfore he made mother ".
In conclusion, women are always supportive till the end of life and inculcate the good morals and values.In addition with good behaviour. Therefore Mother took a most important part in raising children in the societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03584229391 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55855799612 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7060984238 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.076923077 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291512839824 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106367217005 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860210881165 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187789404917 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735059796395 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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