The diagram depicts how the bricks are formed for the use of Building Industry.overall it can be seen that there are only few steps that produces a strong bricks without any difficulties.
In the first stage, the clay which is used for making bricks is dig out from the ground with the help of digger. Then this clay placed on to the metal grid. The reason to placed on to the metal grid is to break the long and heavy pieces into the smaller pieces.then this tiny pieces passed on to the roller and mix with water and sand.
Following to this Mixture, it turned in to a perfect shape of bricks by either placing into a mould or by wire cutter that remove a thin material and produced good bricks.next to this, bricks trasported in the oven for drying purpose upto 48 hours.
In the subsequent stage, the bricks go through the heating and cooling process. They are heated in a kiln at moderate temperature and then suddenly at high temperature upto 1300 degree celcius.then it followed by coolling process in a chamber for 2-3 days Eventually the bricks are packed and deliverd to the final destinations.
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981 1991 and 2001 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 68
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have a greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Gi 84
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- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...trong bricks without any difficulties. In the first stage, the clay which is us...
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...he roller and mix with water and sand. Following to this Mixture, it turned in ...
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...in a chamber for 2-3 days Eventually the bricks are packed and deliverd to the fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59595959596 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56299074103 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60101010101 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.8233293315 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172755767421 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790756681683 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665334327102 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105256959464 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558589597008 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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