Many people choose to live alone. What do you think the advantages of living alone are and do they outweigh the disadvantages?
There are an increasing number of people who prefer to live alone. This has several reasons for such a trend; the improvement of standard of living, the perception of people changed, the government support for living alone increased etc. As the incremental of population to live alone has brought several advantages, especially freedom and being independents, but the responsibilities for freedom and financial independent are inevitable. Therefore, those responsibilities are outweighing the advantages.
Economic and social assistances have helped people to live alone. The reasons for such an increment would be the government’s financial patronage including unemployment benefits and low-budget housings as well as the societal assistance in the form of various products targeting single households such as single packed groceries, already cooked meals and single package for travelling. All those assistances have made people to live comfortably by themselves.
There are several advantages can be brought from living alone, but the main reason would be the independent and freedom. According to the UK statistics, the proportion of living alone has been doubled within 3 years from 10% in 2013. Among those statistics, the majority of people have answered for living alone as the freedom (43%) and the independence (35%), followed by attracting opposite sex (10%), no quarrel between family members (10%) and no sharing personal equipment (2%).
Looking at the detail, people can be enjoyed making all the decisions by themselves. People can learn the consequences from the decision made and to learn about the responsible for such decisions. If they are within families, they may have to tell the full details of their plans for such decisions, which can be bothersome. When people might have to go out at night for friends’ birthday party, they may have to explain the full detail of who that friend is.
Furthermore, people are free from nag and interruptions from parents, so they can enjoy their own lifestyles. All their decisions are based on their will and interest, which can enhance people’s lifestyles. Despite all these advantages of independent and freedom, the responsibilities from independent and freedom are inevitable.
Completely being independent in a decision making process seems advantageous, but the consequences from wrong decision are lethal. For example, if people have chosen to take travelling around the world without notify anyone, their families can expect of the worst case (death). When people made a wrong decision or judgment, they need an adult’s or family’s help to solve the problem together with elder’s wisdom.
Another difficulty would be the financial management since people have to manage all the finances by themselves. Even though the basic payment can be supported by the government in the form of unemployment benefits and low-housing budgets, which are not enough for entertainment activities (party, travel, eat out) and sometimes their priorities on entertainment led to insufficient account balance to support for living expenses. With all those drawbacks are directing people to learn practical experience and knowledge from families before living alone for wishing for freedom and independent.
In conclusion, as the society and economic developed, living alone can be easily achievable. There are several advantages and disadvantages for living alone. Regardless with the getting and learning independent and freedom of lifestyles, the worth of responsibilities and financial knowledge are weigh more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248012718601 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.155802861685 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0810810810811 0.0946595960268 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0413354531002 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0222575516693 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117647058824 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0651828298887 0.0403226058552 162% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.15339553681 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238473767886 0.0326793684256 73% => OK
Particles: 0.00317965023847 0.00163938923432 194% => OK
Determiners: 0.0842607313196 0.0861772015684 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0254372019078 0.021408717616 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111287758347 0.011925033212 93% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3584.0 1933.35771543 185% => OK
No of words: 544.0 316.048096192 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.58823529412 6.12580529183 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.20517956788 115% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.431985294118 0.374742101984 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.330882352941 0.28420135186 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246323529412 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.193014705882 0.137316102897 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15339553681 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.037074148 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477941176471 0.56093040696 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.8343716611 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0891783567 162% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9230769231 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.236192793 49.517814964 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.846153846 127.492653851 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7743622355 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.814263465372 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38877755511 182% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 54.0113122172 49.1944974215 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.96376811594 1.69124875643 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429032051179 0.332605444948 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111338344526 0.102741220458 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0762089596288 0.0668466124924 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.579258726495 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119735752968 0.148594505496 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17761108846 0.134430193775 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626383424111 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291501153256 0.324371583561 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0706134638607 0.0638462369009 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272118685365 0.228012699653 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814890057765 0.058150111329 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.68436873747 207% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 5.90881763527 254% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 22.0 10.4468937876 211% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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