Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are always arguments about going to university to get a degree or taking vocational training courses because of a shortage of skilled workers such as builders, electricians, and plumbers. That is why I believe that the number of people that graduate from university and manual workers should be equivalent.
There are several reasons why people want to pursue higher education. The first reason is that people with a degree can get better job opportunities and higher salaries. That is why recruiters favor candidates who have formal qualifications over those who do not. Besides that, some professions require a university degree as a minimum requirement, such as doctors, architects, and even teachers. For example, if medical graduates want to work in hospitals, they have to get a formal degree since the hospital cannot recruit doctors or pharmacists without professional expertise. Not only that, with a university degree, people have a chance to expand their educational background to gain a master's degree or even a doctor of philosophy.
However, I also believe that there are several reasons why more people should attend vocational training courses to improve the blue-collar workers. The first reason is that vocational courses can help find jobs faster for learners. Nowadays, the number of people choosing to study in university is too large, which has led to a very high rate of job competition after graduation. As a result, this has increased the unemployment rate. In contrast, apprentices have more job opportunities because of the few numbers of learners and the guarantee of jobs from vocational training centers. The next reason is saving the time of the apprentices. A vocational course usually lasts for around two years instead of four years like study academic in university. As a result, people can start working and earning money quickly. The last reason is that apprentices also play an important role in daily life. For example, if an area has a power failure but lacks man-workers, this will have a huge impact.
In conclusion, I believe that more people should be trained in professions in order to ensure the balance between university graduates and skilled workers such as plumbers or electricians.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2271468144 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93532624188 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523545706371 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1219036565 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3157894737 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291577618455 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805875917116 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066522026686 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199089681765 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623977479724 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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