Many people have difficulty finding work that they enjoy doing. What are the reasons for this and what can people do to find enjoyable careers?
Include any relevant explanations and examples from your own experience?
It is every persons dream to have a job of their own interests. These are the jobs people have a desire to do and to invest their energy in, as much as 40 hours a week, often smiling and feeling positive while working. In this way, people are more productive and enjoy a high quality of life. I believe the reason people find it hard to pursue enjoyable careers is they lack education credentials, job opportunities, and financial incentives. However, these hurdles can be overcome through higher-level academics and business growth.
Fundamentally, many people dream of having jobs that are quite limited in availability and require a specific skill set that can be gained only through advanced education. In addition, they may feel that even with having such a job they cannot earn as much as they want. Certain high-end jobs are only one in a thousand and require at least a master's degree and often Ph.D. to be eligible. Even with such jobs, in many countries, finances may still be challenging and people opt for better paying work that they may not like. In my case, in Cuba, it takes seven years of university to become a doctor and there are only 100 new job openings per year in this field, but a taxi driver can make more money commuting tourists to various destinations and there are thousands of available positions. These are definite challenges that need to be overcome for people to find work that they are excited about doing.
Fortunately, there are ways that people can earn the job that gives them a great deal of life satisfaction through continued education and business venture. Hard working individuals can identify work that makes them feel happy and then pursue such a career by finishing university and having competitive skills to position themselves in their desires field. Once there, they can increase their revenue by ten-fold or more through building a company around their passion. A Cuban who dreams of becoming a doctor should finish medical school and then establish their own clinic in order to make more money and pursue their dream career. In this way, they can earn more than taxi driver and be happy doing it.
In conclusion, people most often have difficulties finding likable work because of low pay, availability, and education. Nevertheless, through academic and business perseverance these challenges can be overcome. Ideally, for a truly fulfilling life every person is passionate about the work they do on a daily basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, while, at least, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92805755396 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65655701446 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52757793765 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6800282699 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.157894737 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274900301102 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923566753788 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605551595156 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186569761666 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447557203635 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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