Many people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere because of advances in communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Today, working and living are more convenient for many people. Those are facilitated by the advances of technology. this subsidy, I believe, would bring about more significant advantages for human working and living related to that I will outline in my essay.
Regarding the benefits, perhaps we must admit that technology development in the communication area makes people live and work easier. work could be done in various part in the world or in the other word, people today do not have to be present in the office to do the job. For instance, they could use e-mail to report the job or use teleconference to conduct a business meeting. Moreover, the motion of communication technology could also simplify financial transaction such as sending and receiving money using ATM or E-Banking.
However, we should not ignore various drawbacks that this subsidy may bring about. First and foremost, the advances of technology are the main contributor to increasing of cyber crime. For example, identity theft and unauthorized access to the financial account. Furthermore, the improvement of communication technology has proven to generate immoral act such as abuse or abduction. In addition, it could also lead to individualism, dependency and selfish behavior. For example, in the past, people socialize in the workplace, but now people tend to do work-related communication through electronic messengers or video conference. that behavior could bring bad influence to the work environment and to human interaction.
In conclusion, while the issue seems has disadvantages to some extent, I would argue that the benefits that this subsidy my lead are more significant. this includes the simplicity in working and living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38745387454 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0853607549 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.970854087 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304339936228 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846045091794 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637418468012 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163304644322 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327916568839 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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