Q: In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?
The number of elderly people in many countries experiences a burgeoning increase in the recent decade. In my opinion, there are both positive and negative consequences led by this issue.
The increasing number of people over 60-year old might cause social issues. First of all, this will raise the old-age dependency ratio as many elderly people are not financially independent and do not have regular income to fulfil their basic necessity. So, the governments have to support old-age people by providing living allowances and accommodations. If the nations have not unburdened financially on the elderly people, this money can be allocated for other public purposes such as education and technology sector having more impact on the society and nation as a whole.
However, the growing number of people over 60-year old indicates the better development of a nation because this defines that the country has a better improvement, especially in the health sector. Take several developed nations such as Japan and French as an example, having more than 15% of the elder population caused by the increasing of life expectancy. This is evidence that they provide the best health services for the public to ensure that the citizens have the best physical well-being as well as can live longer.
To sum up, an additional number of older people population in several countries should be considered both negative and positive outcomes. The drawback of this phenomenon is that the government must initiating and funding many programs for the elderly to make sure their well-being, while the merit of this issue is the nations experienced a well-off trend a general.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ative consequences led by this issue. The increasing number of people over 60-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, while, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26119402985 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77925717393 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4415338511 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.181818182 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242880169895 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092968819341 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360232344833 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155485909964 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344441678133 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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