Nowadays, due to the enormous development of technology and especially internet, people are having a tendency to communicate online instead of meeting in person. In my opinion, this trend has both benefits and drawbacks.
I think there are two main advantages of the rising in online communication. The first is people who choose to socialise online have more opportunities to communicate with people all over the world. Making global friends brings us significant benefits such as broaden our knowledge about other cultures, and also improve our language skill which might help us a lot in life or at work. The second advantage is that face to face communication may be limited by time and venue, while we can meet online everytime you want and everywhere you like, your own house, for example. This is really helpful for people who are so busy at work that cannot have freetime in the day to go outside their work spaces, therefore, online communication provides them flexible arrangement.
Despite the benefits mentioned above, socialising online also cause a lot of disadvantages. Firstly, this is not really safe for people communicate via the Internet, especially teenagers, due to the fact that hackers can easily steal your private information just by having an online chat or call with you. Secondly, gradually, people are being hesitated when they have to meet somebody in person, instead, they love to spend time staying at their home alone, this can lead to isolation, or even depression and other mental health issues. In short, we will have to suffer many serious problems if choosing online communication.
In conclusion, in my opinion, meeting other people via Internet has both benefical and detrimental effects that we need to balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15034965035 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83874096933 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9947294147 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280799739372 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100154569001 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769198710916 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150079465455 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847325176338 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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