Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should the government give more financial support to local film industries?
In the ever-expanding options in entertainment film industry, people are able to choose whatever genere to watch. Nevertheless, preference on foreign films compared with locally produced films has aroused reflection and a debate whether government should pay more attention to local films in economic aspect. As far as I am concerned, apart from the difference on quality of films, cultural and economical effects cannot be overlooked.
Initially, the storytelling and artistic expression of a film have its essential importance, in which way foreign films exceed local films mostly. Originated from the foreign countries, the history of films industry is much longer in western fields, fostering a large number of experts and genius in every part of in industry. Therefore, the assembly-line production emerged, efforts from diverse department all contribute to a good film under technically experts, whether for its narrate or attracting special effects. Also the development of some companies have hooked a sum of audiences, such as Hollywood and Warner brothers. On top of that, local films fall behind on the quality of the films itself and its relatively less audiences.
Secondly, making a decision constantly affected by culture and economy. reasons. Foreign films do not conform to conventional regulation while local films strictly strain by policies, in which some topics concerning social issues have no space to express. Hence, people’s attention and interest on them drop. On the other side, financial support on films have a decisive impact. The preperation, shooting and cutting rely on finance, for instance, the buying of props, renting of a set and salaries of actors and backstage staff. In this case, governments should offer more financial support on this field so that local films can boost.
In conclusion, although foreign films excel on local films on its quality, content and appearance and individuals prefer to watch foreign films, cultural and economic reasons hide from it. Accordingly, with financial support and other helps, the day when people primarily tend to choose it to watch is not far away.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...uch longer in western fields, fostering a large number of experts and genius in every part of in ...
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Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... narrate or attracting special effects. Also the development of some companies have ...
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Line 2, column 724, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun audiences is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... of the films itself and its relatively less audiences. Secondly, making a decision...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Reasons
...tantly affected by culture and economy. reasons. Foreign films do not conform to conven...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39820359281 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8905739753 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604790419162 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0253833033 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499912104851 0.244688304435 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15517223162 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133747461503 0.0667982634062 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317408522372 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478895927334 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.