Many people proclaim that many criminals commit further crimes as
Many people proclaim that many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. This essay makes a case for the main reasons of this issue and then describe the possible effects of the problem.
In my point of view, the foremost causes of the criminals are an increasing number of unemployment people and not fully educated. Currently, more punished people are not able to find the work, as a result of it they are continuing stealing and shaving. Moreover, the problem is accentuated by the growing number of people, who’s behavior which does not fit into a public place. For example, about 50% of people who are released from prison are doing the things that lead to their imprisonment.
The possible effects of this problem include an increasing number of crimes and it has a detrimental effect on many people. First of all, obesity results in the dramatically rose of malfeasance, it should come as no surprise that crimes are increased day by day by offenders. For instance, it is widely excepted that there is a room argument about the criminals which are doing thefts and killings. Secondly, offenses also have bad effects on people. One major shortcoming of the government is that they are releasing criminals ahead of time, however it is a possible reason for them to do crimes. In other words, approximately 50 or 60 % of community are getting of jail early and it is the outcome detrimental effects on people, which is able to pull from behind.
In conclusion, crime is a big problem that affects a lot of people nowadays. It is mainly caused by growing unemployment people and it is bad effect for community, and also criminals are not fully educated, however it is a result of increasing number of malfeasanse.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: WHOS_NN[4]
Message: Did you mean 'whose behavior'?
Suggestion: whose behavior
...tuated by the growing number of people, who’s behavior which does not fit into a public place....
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day by'.
Suggestion: day by
...s no surprise that crimes are increased day by day by offenders. For instance, it is widely e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82392026578 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7503383814 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3377888179 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272027217377 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989999648556 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175271506148 0.0667982634062 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193838715291 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14366230988 0.056905535591 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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