Many people say that by paying taxes, they have made enough contribution to society, while others believe that there are more responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that tax contribution is the sole obligation of civilians to the society; however, others suppose that these responsibilities are not enough. I will discuss both of these views in this essay below.
On the one hand, it is believed that paying taxes is the socially beneficial action of citizens in their country. Nowadays, it becomes the imperative responsibility of the entire people to serve the community purpose. For instance, the state authorities will use taxes contributed by citizens as the government funding for reconstructing the road traffic system or establishing the vaccine fund which helps people mitigate the risk of Covid-19. Therefore, each individual’s tax money gives a donation of enhancing the life quality and promoting the development of national economy.
Although paying taxes is indispensable, civilians should be more responsible to the society. One clear example is staying home during the severe outbreak of Covid-19. This action is not only vitally necessary for individuals but also limits the spread of pandemic and assists relieve the pressure on the medical system of the nations. In addition, there are some other actions which people can contribute to the community such as doing charity, helping people in difficult circumstance.
To sum up, although some people think that they have enough responsibility to the society, I personally encourage giving more by other community activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50892857143 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0688189703 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629464285714 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7689944619 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310052993438 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110325300658 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803926781247 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200992411712 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635763469372 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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