The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
High income is thought to be the most crucial factor impacting on the career preference of people. I completely disagree with this opinion and my viewpoints will be proved in this essay below.
On the one hand, salary is not the only aspect that people should consider when decide to apply for a job. It is immutably true that some other components such as working environment, managers, colleagues who directly support people in work place also effect on the satisfaction of workers. One clear example is waiter or waitress which is the position requiring the effective teamwork between employees. Therefore, teammates are the vital factor determining the work quality. In addition, if people work in the appropriate environment, they will be more motivated to finish their assignment efficiently.
In the modern life, more and more people would rather choose their career based on the salary or parents’ preference than their personal interest. Due to those reasons, they work day after day like a machine without happiness. For instance, to meet the expectation of parents, a creative student, who prefers occupations related to art, decided to learn and work as an accountant, which is completely different from her interest. As a result, she feels unhappy despite the fact that this is the stable position helping her earn relatively high salary.
To sum up, earning the large amount of money is not the most vital aspect that people should consider when choosing career because there are also various other factors such as working environment or personal interest effect on their decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20849420849 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70791004139 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3884907494 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.416666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105144063946 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391611159233 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523134310355 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757693242473 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427574838207 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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