The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
For the past decades, applying for a job has always been a topic of great interest. A handsome salary is thought to be the most must-have thing for some people when choosing any career or job. Personally, I strongly disagree with the idea that and I will explain the reasons in this essay.
To begin with, choosing a job is really important for all of us because we have to do this in a long time. Therefore, we have to consider other aspects also such as workload, time, regulations, policies. Whether people do not consider for all aspects of the job, they will be under pressure and cannot get a work-life balance. For instance, when people can consider the job in all aspects, they will have a right look about the job, which will help them always happy.
Another reason why people should consider for the job is that choosing a career which gives them a lot of money do not make their life delightful. I mean, that job can bring a lot of problems to our life. In fact, to have a high income, people have dedication to their company a lot. Not only, they have to spend time doing their work, but also, they have to be under a considerable pressure in a long time. So, they are not able to spend time looking after their family or they will have some mental issues.
All in all, I do not agree with the view that the most important thing when applying for a job is having a competitive salary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... In fact, to have a high income, people have dedication to their company a lot. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, therefore, for instance, i mean, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38697318008 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32482137162 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505747126437 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1768631145 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0769230769 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279279844568 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109436860843 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786767128035 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193787093579 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376154898478 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.