The most important consideration when choosing any career orjob is having a high income.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been argued that the benefit people usually concern most when seeking the new opportunity is salary. Obviously, there are a load of benefits that employees are able to acknowledge when getting a new job, they perhaps miss out on a suitable occupation. Therefore, it is true that other benefits deserve to be determined instead of income only.
Undoubtedly, salary is one of the most important factors when choosing the career or a job. To be detailed, possessing a high income makes people comfortable to contribute to the company. That said, there is no distraction and employees always focus on effectiveness. Besides, money could help employees to afford expensive living expenses in the heart of the city and provide them with increased living quality. Actually, settling down in a location with a great living condition probably leads to working in the company for a long time.
Let's take a look at the contrast point of view, not only a fascinating salary but also other benefits usually attract candidates significantly who are seeking a new job. The first reason is that other benefits such as bonus, healthcare, equipment, and allowance which the enterprise has to purchase for you are really valuable, although the amount of money is uncertain. Another reason is dependence on specification of the job and personal demands. Individual passion is absolutely crucial, people who work in the field they are really passionate about tend to work at the company in the long term. On top of passion, orientation in the future ought to match well with the development plan of the corporation.
In conclusion, income should be considered in advance but people also need to pay attention to other factors. Concretely, money could help people get a better life in the present but other factors will make them keep this greatness lasting for a long time and reach the pinnacle in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03797468354 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82953866491 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3246418454 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932514414752 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358663536117 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06155674771 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564733385161 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042948944807 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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