For the last few decades, it is supposed that the teachers' roles are fading way on account of Artificial Intelligence, whereas some people assert their vital parts in education. From my point of view, I partly agree with the statement due to several reasons which teachers are leaders and role models in the lives of students.
First and foremost, it cannot be denied that teachers are the second greatest educators only after their parents. The role of a teacher in a student's life extends beyond teaching. They do not only have to teach compulsory subjects at school but also have responsibility to impart essential life skills to students that are useful in their personal lives. For example, schoolteachers must teach their students about critical thinking through demonstration. When making important decisions, they must think aloud, discuss the pros and cons of a particular problem in front of the students, and try to be impartial when making judgements. This way, the students will quickly comprehend the process of critical thinking and put it into practice.
In addition, when it comes to teachers' roles, we must refer to the role of a teacher as a role model. A role model is a crucial figure in everyone's life; they inspire us, encourage us and bring out the best in us. A role model is someone we can look up to and follow behavior which we absorb and imitate consciously or unconsciously. Furthermore, instructors sometimes mean a good advisor and listener. When their students are in troubles, they can lend
a sympathetic ear to their students like parents and then work out for appropriate solutions in such difficult situations. As a role model, they instill moral values and qualities like honesty, commitment, and fairness. As a result, they have the propensity for guiding their students to become better human beings and to take good initiatives to make the world a better place.
Besides, with the development of robots and technology, they involve in assisting students in their learning. Although Artificial Intelligence are programmed to work with perfect accuracy, make less errors than human beings, they cannot totally replace the roles of a teacher. Therefore, we must take advantages of both teacher's roles and technology's assistance.
In conclusion, in spite of the technology's development, it is true that education cannot develop without teacher's contributions.
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue this is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 89
- Children today are to dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional past times than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree with the statement Wri 56
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 56
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 79
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2030848329 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9108658302 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565552699229 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4450027733 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.526315789 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05263157895 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168632945977 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553795041615 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525809747221 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920851181789 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455961938826 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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