many people think that home made food is healthy and some prefer eating outside, what do you think of this
It is argued that eating street food or at the restaurant is more preferable to having healthy options that are cooked at home. I would suggest that things at our own house are definitely a better option than consuming outside food. This essay explains why it is best along with couple of examples.
To begin with, streets attract people with strong smells of fast food by using various substances which are harmful if consumed too much and too often, this can only be considered when there is no other option to decide, although there are too many choices from waffles to fancy sea foods they are best when taken at limited amounts. For instance, a study has revealed that people who prefer eating out are more vulnerable to gastric disorders when compared to that of consuming a home-cooked meal.
On the other hand, now a days all the ingredients to make a wonderful varieties of dish are available to make the food we wish and that too with a healthy touch on it whether it could be a salad or a pizza everything is possible with multiple choices to cook which should be our primary go to choice. For example, a study has shown that life expectancy among members who consume home made food was around 70 to 80 years in comparision to people who eat out and live 10 years less.
In conclusion, I belive that despite the craving to eat out, everyone must try to avoid junk food and prepare themselves as much as possible and can stay healthy without compromising the taste and satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...home-cooked meal. On the other hand, now a days all the ingredients to make a wonderful...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...-cooked meal. On the other hand, now a days all the ingredients to make a wonderful...
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Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'variety'?
Suggestion: variety
...all the ingredients to make a wonderful varieties of dish are available to make the food ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62546816479 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47611717804 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614232209738 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0025143315 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.375 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.375 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206892720649 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913780369435 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429847594398 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121775461449 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308969033636 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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