The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
An awful fact of the developing world is that it is growing at the cost of the environment and vanishing wildlife. Every activity man does on earth today is resulting in detrimental damage to creatures of both on earth and in the water. The possible occurrences for this could be occupying free spaces for own sake and factories which are emitting harmful substances into the water.
Animals such as tortoise and dolphins were used to appear more often in the past which became very hard in the present days. when a man wants to build a house he chops trees makes the space for his home and constructs which involves taking away homes of birds, squirrels, rabbits, you name it, and also when a plant is cut 10% of oxygen deprivation occurs around the area thus damaging air too. Artificial agents that are used to grow foods and organics are making soil infertile and leading to damage to our own health. For instance, in India, more than 70% of shelters are built by whacking away natural habitat which is why there are drastic climate imbalances around the country.
Furthermore, industries that are established for self earnings by selling their own manufactured goods are causing remarkable damage to the waters. Dangerous chemicals being released by the production of vehicles or tiles are directed towards seas or nearby lakes to neutralize which in turn causing damage to aquatic habitat. oil refineries located in the mid of the ocean are evacuating waste products into oceans itself which should need definitive attention to immediately curb. For instance, a mistake in oil factory in the USA has lead to death of more than 40% of aquatic creatures in the Pacific ocean, this damage is still having effects on terrestrials which pass that region in the ocean.
In conclusion, whatever is done till today is enough to take immediate action and need to show some responsibility to save water and earth. Only people in the society can tackle this issue as they are the ones who did such huge damage. Governments should conduct awareness camps and announce steps to follow in maintaining a healthy connection with land and seas, lakes and puddles. In this way this causes could be addressed and our future generation can also have chance of utilizing these nature's gifts to mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...h became very hard in the present days. when a man wants to build a house he chops t...
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Line 9, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Oil
...turn causing damage to aquatic habitat. oil refineries located in the mid of the oc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92802056555 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57375909826 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622107969152 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.8993502999 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9333333333 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0284591390865 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00997847196984 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0165695971227 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0168214826282 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00299320429154 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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