Many people think region effect successful person. Whats your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong.
Many of us argue that the success of an individual depends upon their native place .In my opinion, it not only depends upon the natives environmental place but also relies on person’s determination and will power that places a pivotal role in shaping the person .
To embark on, native places shapes the character of the person inculcating traits like leadership,patriotism,social development. A person develops this habits over a course of time .i firmly believe apart from this other factors like neighbours ,environment and resources plays a crucial role in shaping the career of an individual. For example, the journey of NarendraModi from a tea seller to the prime minister of India is greatly influenced by the society’s political and economical issues.
Asevery coin has 2 sides, in my opinion sometimes it becomes important to switch places to know our own potential ,Many factors such as inadequate educational facilities,lack of resources and technology forces a person to switch to new places .During the course of time an indivisual experiences the hardships and obstacles which eventually helps to become a successful person .To exemplify ,Indira Nooyi ,CEO of PepsiCo had to leave her native place India after her masters to explore the opportunities to become successful.
To conclude, a person should look for the right opportunities to climb the ladder of success. Only native place cannot be detrimental factor to make one affluent .One should come out of their comfort zone and explore for new opportunities and thus make the best use of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, apart from, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26587301587 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3144266359 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.815285421 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.571428571 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154817443069 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073590072827 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445452999158 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965753206643 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032766605144 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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