Many people think regions affect successful persons.native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Success is accompanied by various factors. Among them one major factor would be region from where they start to work. Successful persons would have better support in a place where all necessary support and amenities would be available. This essay will discuss about how region plays a vital role for one's success.
Cities have better development than urban areas and would have the more job opportunities, better educational institutions etc. Most of the cities have the best Research and Development centres with highly efficient and automated tools for development of new medicines and other commodities. Also, cities have the better transports when compared to native regions. For example, Chennai metro rail is wide spread thought out chennai and could cover 60 km in 20 minutes. A recent study says that modern city favours many people to achieve their goals.
On the other hand native regions are yet to be developed and have poor quality of roads. Some of the village don't have enough water facilities for domestic purposes. In these case’s an individual would lack support for his personal needs. Government prefers rural areas over urban to plan for new developments like Hospitals, Public transport as it would be easy and would generate more revenue. For example, in several villages primary school are not available and students have to travel long hours for education. This shows how native regions would not be suited for development.
From the above essay we conclude how and why regions influence for one's development and success. In my opinion people should move to regions where they would have favourable situtations for self and family development towards success.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31985294118 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59232370527 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628676470588 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5242523299 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1176470588 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23529411765 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174946769416 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685598474179 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717349944955 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13829561381 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093600573936 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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