Many people think that students should be allowed to choose the subjects that they study in school, whereas others feel that they should study a set curriculum.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Choosing of school subjects recommended done by students that thinking of some people. On the other side, people have a notion on that topic in contrary view so students have to stick on their studying curriculum which is obtained by their school. This essay will examine both sides of the argument and provide an overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there is a number of reasons why believe people that students have a chance to select their subjects. Perhaps the main reason why people think that students who can opt their subjects is because they find a chance to select their interested subjects, thus, they may have a more concentrations of their classes that brings up happy students profile who love to go school every day, no compliment about school and more achievement on their subjects.
Despite these arguments, many people feel that students have to stick their curriculum which provide by their school. Students always looking for their favorite classes but if you don’t get fundamental of computers then you cannot success in advanced computers class which provide set out a gaming project. School always obtain an experienced curriculum which suitable for every students. However, it may causes some students who have no interest with a subject but have to take these subject and then they can distract other classmates and teacher with their attitudes.
In conclusion, it must be said that selection of their curriculum or no selection have become a complex issue with no easy solutions. Personally, I prefer to students have a opportunity to select their subjects with pre-information which is provided by ancient students that will give a more energy to easily focus on their subjects. If government want to do that is project, first of all they have to trial on a pilot school then with knowledge acquisition on that project they may apply other school efficiently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey may apply other school efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, thus, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11254019293 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67150137441 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514469453376 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2485171848 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233152802442 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100135561224 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516617344052 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162853782825 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463002847994 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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