Many people today are worried about ‘cybercrime’ such as hacking and identity theft.
What problems does ‘cyber-crime’ cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people
and businesses to take?
Widespread of internet among people daily routine life throughout the world followed with some hazardous incident called cyber-crimes. This sort of crime threatens usually financial and private life of subscribers of virtual world. Of course there are a large number of practices that can be taken regarding preventing of this issue.
On the other hand, cyber-crimes comprise numbers of wrongdoing, from theft, invasion of privacy and even murder. Financial issues include the majority of cyber-crime and it happens because of some overlooking of people. As long as people are not cautious about their account identity and passwords or they don’t take advantage of sophisticated software and procedure. Hence, they would suddenly find account empty. Therefore, this results in disastrous consequences for either people or victims. Firstly, victims would suffer and should tolerate stress of losing a great deal of money. Secondly, money that is stolen by virtual thieves would subsidize other plan in order to committing other delinquencies by offenders.
On the one hand, there are some appropriate measures to be taken for reduction in damages to people from cyber-crimes. People ought to be more wary of their assets by taking the most effective approaches and it could be readily possible by publicity and public education. Secondly, organization and banks particularly should have more cooperation with police with regard to inhibition of cyber-crime. Furthermore, provision of more trustworthy network system by organization could pave the way of having less crime since wrongdoers could not steal ordinary people sensitive information.
To conclude, it is transparent that internet crime would contribute to various issues people face with. Of course, there are determined resolution which is in need of people caution and implementation of some plans by organization and authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'threatens'.
Suggestion: usually threatens
...called cyber-crimes. This sort of crime threatens usually financial and private life of subscribe...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s of virtual world. Of course there are a large number of practices that can be taken regarding p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, of course, sort of, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64111498258 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03115061962 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613240418118 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2565400345 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.1875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123858885332 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371545272069 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426963669061 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661257589013 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307104512211 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.