Many people were involved in sports as children, but do not do any physical exercise as adults. What are the reasons adult avoid physical exercise?
Sports play a crucial and prominent role in the life of people as well as toddlers. Hence, people are unwilling to participate in any physical activities like in case of youth. This essay intends to unveil the possible reasons behind the negligible role of physical activities in people's life.
Along with several reasons, first and foremost is lack of intrest in physical exercises. To justify it, a recent survey concluded by the true leaders of olympic that nearly 85% sport athletes do not want to do extra physical activities, because they think that, it is a wastage of time to put extra load on body as it may torn the muscles due to over excretion of energy, desatblise the body structure. Moreover, they have hand in glove realtionship between goal and the one who wants to accomplish. For instance, an athlete wants to became a gold medalist for which not only more hardwork but also extra attention should be required to achieve. So in order to win he has to avert his eyes from the other activities.
What is more, there is onother probability that young people are less aware physical exercise due to improper training methods. For example, we cannot star a car without the key, same in the case of activities as we couldnot do unless and until we know about it or guided. As a result, being unaware halts us to do physical exercise. Another point to be noted is that, sometimes health problems is one of the major issue which bemts a person towards one direction. To elaborate it, some people might have brain injuries which creates terror in their mind regarding physical activities. Thence, having trouble in brain stops them to do physical activities.
In conclusion, after having all the views into mu knowledge, i believe that involvemwnt in physical activities is lucrative but under certain measures and conditions to live a healthy and happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'tear' or 'be torn'?
Suggestion: tear; be torn
...ime to put extra load on body as it may torn the muscles due to over excretion of en...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...having all the views into mu knowledge, i believe that involvemwnt in physical ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85358255452 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62752964494 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632398753894 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7142519106 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.866666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264220011042 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837979827839 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667049496156 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138406176489 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697433135443 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.