The trend of online shopping is increasing what effect does it have on environment and society in general?
In this modern era , technology has revolutionised the way people doing shopping. Now ,offline shopping had taken a back seat due to popularity of e-shopping which effects badly to the surroundings as well as society. This essay intends to discuss reasons behinh this accurance.
Along with multiple reason, first and foremost is people are becoming more extravagent. Nowadays ,they largely rely on internet shopping to buy products because it is hard nut to crack for them to avert their eyes from the ocean of offers . For instance , a person seeked on internet to buy just one t-shirt but in an offer on amazon he can get one free if he purchase two instead of one , this offer changes his mind as he bought three of them by paying extra money. Thence , people are accustomed to spending lavishly. Moreover , the value of market and shopping centre is on the verge as they cannot gain enough credits for bread and butter due to establishment of e-shopping . To justify it, a woman is willing to buy a purse which costs less online as compared to the market . Consequently , people are glued to the online shopping .
What is more, shopping on internet is a great hazardous to environment because online shopping deals in great packaging of the product for the safe delivery to the consumer which turns into trash once the package opened and that trash creates a lot of pollution. For example , the waste package ir thrown into rivers cause great water pollution as it destroys marine creatures. Moreover , when it is burnt it creates a lot of ash and smoke emission , affects badly on human health . As a result , temperature of global warming is uprising and lead a great disasters to mankind.
In conclusion , after having all the views into my knowlede , i , personally , believe that bad effects can be reduced to some extent , if online shopping is permitted under certain conditions and circumstances .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90062111801 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70205302169 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5809342638 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161184286815 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485164554743 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610663465037 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967746869773 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273806773919 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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