many peoples are using crad cards and loan to run their personals debts.that they may be unable to repay,it should be more difficult for indiviual to burrow large amount of money
Online banking become more popular in the world.most of the persons are utilizing credit card or loan to run up huge personal debt that they cannot repay.so,there should be more complex way to burrow large money for indiviuals.I will discuss both sides and why i consider there must be complicated process to take enormous amount for personal use.
Although,at one hand;these cards made life easier like many crimes of snatching money is decreased.Nobody needs to carry a big amount with them.for exemple previously,there are more incidents of rubbry and breaking houses.but now a days it become incredibliy reduced.secondly,when you donot have enough money you can eassily burrow it and then return.Recently,i went to buy mobile phone which was quiet expensive and my debt was lows as well.so, creedit card was blessing at that time.
But, on the other hand;a large number of peoples who using credit card pile up great amount of debt.which they may not able to pay.The main reason is that many of them pay neglibale amount and their intrest gethered up into handsome amount.hence,the may not found to return it and many problems they come across.for instance one case which i observe my friend who is used to consume above limit and at the time of return is more depresessed.
in my opinion,person should also mangned his expenses quite wisely rather than depend on others.i think the proccess of banking is much complex,account activated after granatee despite this peoples makes mistakes.for instance,when i had gone for account activation they inquire many informations about many other account details and to submit money in account.At the end;from my point of view there should be increased in complication of this process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17081850534 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1156375309 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658362989324 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1663952219 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 363.25 106.682146367 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.25 20.7667163134 338% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.0 7.06120827912 411% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35535555152 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206413141049 0.084324248473 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103446437634 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206413141049 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103446437634 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.0 13.0946893788 290% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.43 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.89 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.55 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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