A huge presence of other resources whom almost finish the importance or need of mentor.although, The other resources give information on just one click but the place of teacher or mentor is as it is.How ever in some extend these resources replace in term of information only these resource only only inform you not teach or guide you.
Although the other resources give information in just a second which make easy to work .But these resources are also driven by any teacher or expert like you tube lecture are also given by teachers or mentors which make easy access to them but not are truly guide you or satisfied you and your trust of knowledge.Internet have bring information nearer to user but not complete substitution of teacher.But Internet person confined to specific place and become a anti social ,psychological problems studies show people how use more Internet are more depressed which lead to other disorder also.
a place of tutor or mentor cannot be substituted by any other resource .Teacher know you very well he teach you guide you and provide knowledge of your need and level.teacher teach in specific environment in which you social connect with other people and teach from society ,learn ethic,discipline in life.Teacher is complete package of Internet or society framework .Most people prefer to take IELTS classes by tutor because they consider it better and it effect more.
teacher need is present as it is with increasing resources availability.These resources provide information only but teacher is mentor his place cannot be replace by any other resource.teacher place is unbeatable and unmeetable by any means.
- In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this ascompletely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learningand taking responsibility.What are your opinions on this? 56
- the chart below shows the information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in summarize the information by reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centers It is feared that this trend can bring negative influences on the youths and the society To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view 87
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorernations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it theresponsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after theircitizens themselves? 67
- some people that their should be fixed punishment for each type of crime.others, however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on punishment .discuss both 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12639405204 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03479633684 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513011152416 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.37447282 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 344.75 106.682146367 323% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.25 20.7667163134 324% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104985264257 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736462573924 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00995999149457 0.0667982634062 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736462573924 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00995999149457 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.4 13.0946893788 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.99 50.2224549098 -10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.3001002004 271% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.66 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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