In many places new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
Number of populations is increasing, cities can’t hold such load of buildings, this may impact on its infrastructure, therefore new homes are needed in countryside. Some people believe it is better not to build new dwellings it may cause damage; others think it its good to build new constructions and develop the countryside.
On one hand, several reasons are damaging the countryside these days, that’s why humans prefer to protect it. First, large forests are ruined, people cut trees for industrial or trading, to increase their profits; also, this will lead to extinction and migration for animals. Second, building new homes will cause negatively on the environment, air pollution will increase due to cars and factories, water will get polluted because of sewers, so people might face chronic diseases like cancer. For example, in Lebanon the government don’t have an infrastructure plan, people build their homes randomly in the countryside, without taking any actions, this will damage several forests and mountains.
On the other hand, the countryside needs to be developed and have services like the cities, so some people think that it is important to move and live in the countryside. First, the inhabitants in the countryside will stay and work there, they aren’t obliged to migrate to the cities for work, this will help in decreasing the load of population in cities. Second, building new railways, firms will encourage the people to move to the countryside, this helps economically and financially. For example, in China they encouraged its society to live int the countryside, by building a developed transportation network and offer several services, so they can trade their goods all over the country without any bonds.
As a conclusion, the increase in number of people leads to move and build new houses in the countryside. Therefore, some people prefer to keep the countryside a healthy area, others believe it is important, to decrease the load of migration toward the cities. In my opinion I think that building in country side will affect positively on the way of living and many areas will develop economically and there will be a lot of job opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24157303371 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96379464788 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51404494382 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.4582845162 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.538461538 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311876930447 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125195342524 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636996443544 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211674305134 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379689204986 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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