Some people think watching movies is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
Millions of movies we can find on the internet, we cannot watch them all, but many people during their free time they watch as much as the can. Watching a lot of movies is a waste of time for some people, others disagree and think that there are some benefits from it.
On one hand, watching movies is un-useful and a waste of time for specific people. First, they think that it affects children's study, they will miss their studies and won't concentrate on what they are learning and give it less time. Second, lack of communication between some people, especially in one family. Moreover, watching movies impact negatively on some people and let them act in bad manner, few got influenced by what they are watching and act like the characters of the movie. For example, Spiderman and Superman movie attracts kid's and keep them away from their studies, playing with friends or having any conversation with parents, some time it led to act in a dangerous way. From my side I disagree, since people can schedule their time to watch movies, and it depend on the person to let the movie concentrate on his life.
On the other hand, some people believe that watching movies is important, many can benefit from it. First, non-English speakers can assist from looking over the movies, learn how to spell and speak the words correctly. Second, it helps young age kids to pick up and introduce to them new words, to learn and try to talk their first word or sentence. However, some people prefer watching movies in their free time instead of going out with friends, to save money and stay home with family. For example, You Baby Can Read book, is a DVD movie specified for children to talk their first word, my nephew learned to talk and say his first words from watching it daily, and this was the best and easiest tactic to help him talk. In my opinion I agree, where watching movies help us a lot to know new meaning and words, and I'm one of them.
In conclusion, some people think that watching movies is a waste of time, others think the opposite and it assist them in their lives. In my opinion, I believe that watching movies helped us a lot to know about new things and spread languages between nations, where people started talking other languages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61290322581 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27871288967 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.0372873082 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1875 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1875 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380173200004 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153997847405 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122292622621 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293687712858 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801363003898 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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