Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Considering the importance of two chief factors namely physical strength and mental strength for sucess in sport, by far, the importance of mental strength is higher than physical strength. With respect to the vital role of mental strength that command and organize all physical parts of human body to work perfectly, it is obvious that without commanding center it is impossible to be succeed in any sport. In addition, the perfect mental strenght highly improves the physical activities by some metabolic reactions inside body. To elaborate more of this subject, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the mental strength is an initial requirement of sucess in sport. The mental strength is implemented to issue a permissive to proceed for the furthur activities. This readiness is a confirmation that all physical parts of body are ready to engage in sport and achieve desired goals. when athletes have a stronge mental strength, it means that they perfectly know the goals, the way to achieve the goals, and their body are completely organized to fullfill the required steps during sport. Without the mental strength, the success in sport is impossible. For instance, during olympic competition, a deluge of individuals or teams were failed in initial steps indicating they were not have sufficient mental readiness, although before the competition, their bodies were completely ready. Therefore, mental strength is the first neccessity of success in sport.
Another primary reason can be ascribed to special role of mental strength in some metabolic reactions playing apart in improvement of physical activities. As proved in literature, during mental strength the concentration of adernaline in blood increases and it brings about high level of excitment for all parts of the body. This enhance the performance of participant during sport activities and it can be significatly elevate their chance to succeed during competitions. On the other hand, low concentration of this compound in body not only leads to a remarkable reduction in phyisical yields, but also it might be main reason for defeat in sport. As a result, the mental strength plays a vital role as a catalyst of physical strength.
To recapitulate, to be success in sport, the importance of mental strength is higher than physical strength regarding its role in organizing the physical performance of body and triggering the required excitement for enhancing the performance of bogy. To my best knowledge, there are numerous athletes who failed during several competitions due to the lack of mental strength and it is a good evident of this subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...age in sport and achieve desired goals. when athletes have a stronge mental strength...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
... initial steps indicating they were not have sufficient mental readiness, although b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30260047281 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91737645884 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458628841608 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4458661238 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.611111111 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309143546519 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125112730164 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893507680604 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222580113208 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445176389112 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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