It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Considering the establishment of a new restaurant in my neighborhood, I strongly incline to oppose this event based on the numerous disadvantages. Although, the presence of a high quality and will-built restaurant can be contributed as an attractive characteristic particularly the financial benefit for some neighborhoods, there are lots of difficulties associated with this issue. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the establishment of a new restaurant is in conjunction with traffic problems. As everyone presumably knows, the requirement of some facilities such as the parking space and the appropriate location are critical. Any lack or deficiency in mentioned characteristics can bring about some annoying feelings for the habitats of the neighborhood in addition to the restaurant's customers. For instance, the parked automobiles in front of the doors of some neighbors can be implied as the current problem when it comes to appropriate location.
In addition, as the intrinsic nature of most restaurants is playing some kinds of music, the noise pollution for the neighborhood can be attributed as another disadvantage of a new restaurant establishment. It is immensely interesting that the priority of most restaurant is the customers satisfaction rather than their neighborhood habitats. Admittedly, most of them will not take care of any bothersome for their surrounding and do every thing to attract new customers. Thus, the neighborhood cannot be attributed as a place for the relaxation.
Aside from the point I made above, the establishment of a new restaurant can eventuate in some violent crimes such as burglary, drug distribution, addict collision, etc. It goes without saying, any crowded area can be contributed as a new potential for some opportunists to bring about illegitimate subjects. Thus, despite the precise surveillance of the police, incidence of probable crimes can be increased.
Taking all these perspectives into account, I cannot disagree more about the establishment of a new restaurant in my neighborhood regarding traffic problems, noise pollution, and crime potential. To my best knowledge, even the presence of the sufficient security provides the required convenience, both traffic problem and noise pollution cannot justify the temporal benefit of a new restaurant for the neighborhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
... the priority of most restaurant is the customers satisfaction rather than their neighbor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62841530055 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46681154474 2.67179642975 130% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527322404372 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.536901245 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161721281493 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612473673372 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033248198147 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988620094006 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395663759643 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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