Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
This world is losing many important resources, like water, animals and forests. These resources are causing and have negative impacts on human being. That's why I will choose one natural resource which is forest, and discuss what leads to deforestation and its effect on us.
On one hand, several causes threatened our environment and especially large forests. First reason, cutting trees since ancient years till now, in order to build ships, dwellings or to set the fire, these things led to deforestation and have empty large areas without trees. Second, with the passage of time, the number of people increased and there is no more spacious places for them to live, therefore they moved toward forests since it's a big area where they tool advantage of its resources to build factories and start new investments. For example, one of the largest forests in California, is now threatened to become a desert because of cutting million of tons of trees each year, without replanting another trees.
On the other hand, many effects will cause on human because of losing forests and its resources. First, the massacre will lead to increase in global warming and the hole of the ozone layer, which is happening now in many polluted places. Temperature on earth will increase, climate will change, ice started to melt because of harvesting the forests. Second, losing forests will lead to decrease in oxygen and this will affect on human beings and cause health problems such as, chronic diseases, allergies and cardiac problems. For example, in Antarctic because of the increase in global warming, green house affected in this area and big number of icebergs started to melt each year and the rate of sea water increased and animals are migrating to colder areas because of global warming.
As a conclusion, losing natural resources will increase global warming, which will threaten and change our lives negatively. That's why I believe all the nations should tale one common decision and start working seriously to solve this environmental disaster.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11904761905 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50356180511 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550595238095 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8591885092 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.857142857 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150375489699 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653107520022 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682115545495 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11710532179 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850557435093 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.