The number of people shifting to rural area for residential purpose due to space constraints in cities is becoming increasingly common. Many people opine that it is not ideal to build new houses in the countryside because it can damage the natural habitat for many animals and farming. This essay will discuss and provide evidence on why I believe it is important to protect the countryside.
It is a known fact that rural regions are rich in different types of animals and insects. Construction of new buildings in rural areas can destroy the natural ecosystem of the region. One good example for this is the catastrophic soil erosion that happened in the year 2018 in Kerala, where the major cause for this was found to be the illegal constructions on the hill regions. Although all humans were rescued during this unfortunate calamity, troll amount of animals died. Hence building houses in rural areas can have negative impact on the natural ecosystem.
In addition to this, if people construct buildings in the rural areas, farming will be destroyed. Soil in countryside is not only rich in minerals required for farming but also free from soil pollution. Therefore, there is a possibility that the construction of houses in these farmlands can lead to soil pollution that in turn might interrupt the growth of crops in these regions. This phenomenon can be witnessed in any region where urbanization happened. Hence, acquiring these farmlands for construction purpose can destroy the cultivation.
In conclusion, people are moving to countryside in search for houses due to lack of space in urban areas. People oppose this idea as it not only destroys the natural ecosystem but also adversely affects the farming in the region. In my opinion it is imperative that people preserve these naturally rich geographical regions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...calamity, troll amount of animals died. Hence building houses in rural areas can have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10631229236 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79336607121 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521594684385 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1716652431 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0625 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23070541705 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786526748662 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061717574494 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159232261165 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697853874873 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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