Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-year-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think crime is determined by human nature？ Is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?
Nowadays, it is a common belief within the scientific field that a person’s potential to be a criminal can be determined in their childhood. However, I think that external factors are more pivotal to one’s development into criminal, and thus intensive care for children should be provided by the government and parents to raise ideal citizens.
Like other human qualities, most anti-social behaviours are acquired and the impact of inborn impulse is comparably minimal. Considering that for many people their personalities change throughout their life, it is obvious that interactions with others and experience take a huge part in the establishment of one’s disposition. And among all constituents of life, the biggest contributor to an individual’s criminality would be their home environment in earlier life. Since the home is where people spend most of their time as a child, it prominently shapes their morals and ethics. To illustrate, a child from a poor family may have a higher likelihood of burglary and theft than those with wealthy parents. As they grow up, impoverished children would continue to commit crimes, as illegal acts would settle in their lifestyle as a means to survive. Therefore, the criminal tendency is not ingrained but is cultivated throughout one’s life.
Since childhood is a significant phase of life that affects one’s development of mannerisms, measures should be taken to keep children mentally and physically fit. Governments should ensure that children are properly treated at their homes and provide help where needed. This can be done by dispatching inspectors to their homes to investigate any signs of poverty, abuse or other household problems and support those affected. On top of that, parents should be responsible for caring for their children and supporting them emotionally. As parents constitute a huge part of a child’s life, building a strong bond with their parents will result in children’s overall satisfaction with their life and a less likelihood to act against society in the long run.
In summary, one’s criminality ensues from extrinsic factors like upbringing, rather than their genes. Therefore, governments and families should invest in the quality life of children and foster a good household environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, i think, in summary, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41620111732 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02355947938 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575418994413 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.014594237 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.1875 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147198108346 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519617319078 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363242550248 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966844629406 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352337713503 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.