Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-year-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think the human nature produces crimes? And how can we prevent children from growing up to be criminals?
People always argue if it is children’s instinct to commit crimes. Although I quite accepted that human nature can be a part of the reason, I do believe measurements should be figured to cease the process.
There are a variety of explanations for the original cause of teenage crime. With the advent of advanced genetic technology, one can detect the criminal possibility of a child merely through analysis of his behavior since we have to admit the basis of this sociobiology theory. However, society should also bear the blame for uncorrected education which directly leads children to the wrong way. For example, movies and plays containing violent content to express the calmness of the main character seem to glorify offences. The absence of parents in their childhood may well be another crucial reason according to the claim of many young criminals.
Government is in an urgent need to take the responsibility to address the root causes of teenage crime. Firstly, the punishment for the teenager is still unreleased. It is obvious that the well-established regulations and laws can serve as the most effective way to deter violence that happened at an early age to some extent. Secondly, children are apt to do harmful things to fellow students with the purpose of joking. The period in primary school is thus the right time for schools and teachers to educate students in order to avoid similar ‘jokes’ and cultivate personalities including the ability of self-control.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for teenage crime, and steps need to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13688212928 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86082700124 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650190114068 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9999311958 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160411359316 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462670437083 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550678842329 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929203969657 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621483252026 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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