There have always been a controversial issue pertaining to working adolescents in a temporary occupation. Most people say there are a number of pros, while others are skeptical about it, and they opine that it has more cons than pros.
Firstly, there are things that should be mentioned as benefit of juveniles having part-time job that they develop a sense of responsibility and become independent. The main reason of it is juveniles learn several things during their work. Moreover, it also deemed that they can learn how to manage their salaries and expenditure. Second point is that communication skills might be improved by teenagers. Why it is considered like this is the fact that every employee ought to be on good terms with colleagues. Therefore, youngsters are good at connection with strangers or non-strangers.
Turning to the drawbacks, firstly it can be proved that teens are notable to manage college studies and work together. Furthermore, if juveniles begin to task in a temporary occupation, it is undeniable fact that they will not obtain high qualification. The next expected ramification is also surprising that if adolescents could not manage their earnings, there will some problems for teens. For instance, increasing of tendency for drinking alcohol, accepting detrimental drugs and anymore. That is due to the fact that parents could not supervise their children after teens have part-time work.
In conclusion, there are a number of beneficial points, however, it cannot be ignored that cons, as the coin has two sides. Teenagers are not in parents' control by working, while children are able to cover their expenditure themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2969924812 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96027030758 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6599990989 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.9333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0713325539402 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211157645631 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347169584388 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387059945872 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100250730544 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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