Due to the fact that increasing possession of vehicles over a period of 30 years, the traffic congestion complications have become worse in the number of metropolises. In the next paragraphs, I will discuss this statement and what can be done to overcome this problem.
First of all, it is an irrefutable fact that, the more and more automobiles are being bought by individuals. The reason why the number of countries has industrialized, and the price is cheaper than past. Prior to the period of industrialization, only affluent citizens could purchase and use machines. In other words, the more transportation refines, the more traffic jams raises. In China, which is the most modernized state, one rush-hour had continued during three days, despite having a spectacular transport system.
However, it is not intractable issue thus administrations should establish acute rights. In the first place, tariffs ought to be maximized, particularly fuel tax, as a consequence the amount of pollution will decrease. Air condition and climate will improve, although there are numerous other reasons. Moreover, it will be appropriate if the social services are more advanced and convenient. Therefore, populace will have propensity to substitute buying automobiles for using public transport.
As a concluding point, indubitably ownership of private cars has raised at an enormous rate, thus traffic jams are also rising. To alleviate this problem, the authorities should redefine public transportation and set serious rights up. It's also responsible to follow the rules and regulations passed by RTI for the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, first of all, in other words, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.532 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1844647902 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7258415142 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112626774998 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323948251926 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039947419757 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700962164828 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454157412719 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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