There are two trends for university students living with are staying in the parents' home while others settle far from homes because of studying in the far university. In my opinion, there are some advantages and drawbacks of these trends. I am going to delve into both the positive and negative aspects of my essay.
On the one hand, there are both advantages and disadvantages for university students living with there families. The most glaring advantage that living in their families helps students save a lot of accommodation fees which occupy large money of total budget per month for each student. Another benefit that these students will enjoy the adequate supports from their families like meals, healing costs, etc. Moreover, parents may help students control their lifestyle, help them balance the time for studying and relaxation. In spite of these advantages, there is a drawback that in some families, parents are sometimes strict because of the gap generation, they will push more pressure on the student if the results of their study are fair.
On the other hand, students who live far from their home also get a lot of benefits and drawbacks as well. There are some viable benefits to living and studying in an unfamiliar city. Firstly, students have to manage everything by themself, it makes students gradually become self-made. Secondly, these students easier to make study routines and to interact with others, therefore they can improve their communication skills. Despite the benefits mentioned above, students live away from home may face challenges, the big challenges is that students are difficult to control themself because there are a lot of attractions may harm their study, for example, many kinds of virtual games make some students become addicted gamer then they have to postpone their study. Another drawback is the high living cost that students have to suffer from, especially, in some big cities, because the accommodations fee are extremely high then many students have to find a part-time job to earn money to pay for them.
In conclusion, each trend has own advantages and disadvantages, for each particular family will choose a better trend that suitable for personal circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 229, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'large money'.
Suggestion: large money
...a lot of accomodation fees which occupy a large money of total budget per month for each stud...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts who live far from their home also get a lot of benefits and drawback as well. ...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: face
...above, students live away from home may face face challenges, the big challenges is that ...
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Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...ions may harm their study, for example, many kind of virtual games make some students bec...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...ntages, for each particular family will chose the better trend that suitable for pers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12994350282 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60656397558 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539548022599 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1986772357 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.066666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352989821687 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123744895506 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786749833686 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197647302706 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933915729582 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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