Accommodation shortage is one of the most unresolvable problems in many cities. In this essay, some reasons for this phenomenon will be illustrated as well as its solutions.
There are several apparent reasons for the shortage of housing. Firstly, the increase in population is not under control. Obviously, since the baby-boom happened, it has been predicted that unavailable space or land for housing is unavoidable. In fact, the goverments has legislated to build high-rise building of apartments to house extra citizens. However, the budget is not always in hand and to compound the problem, not everyone can afford this kind of accommodation. Another reason is that the migration also plays a major role in triggering this phenomenon. It is the tendency that people from rural areas are attracted by a bunch of beneficial conditions from cities as push factors. For instance, they believe that living in cities can provide them with best health care, proper education oppotunities and then changing their lives. Therefore, cities are overloaded with crowds.
To resolve this tough issue, I personally support the family planning which each family should have no more than 2 children. However, many people argue that reproducing is part of human nature, and they must not be prohibited in term of reproducing. That is why rather than putting families under pressure of law, compliments or even rewards can be given to the stereotype families. Moreover, controling the population of migrants should be taken into consideration. In fact, some countries have done this before. For example, Trump, the recent America President, has enforce the migration laws to foreigners, especially Mexicans, by restricting the number of visa. And the result is undeniable, he has solved the issue and kept migrants under control.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons leading to housing shortage and above measures are suggested to tackle the issue effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 759, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
... that living in cities can provide them with best health care, proper education oppotunit...
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Line 5, column 569, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enforced'.
Suggestion: enforced
...rump, the recent America President, has enforce the migration laws to foreigners, espec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34294871795 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90560561119 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6379616709 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7368421053 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222830878365 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599037544727 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048972338037 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140799552344 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047588056175 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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