These days , it is believed that young people should go and work in other countries . Although this idea is reasonable to some extent, i would argue that young people work in their own country forever .
On the one hand , i am convinced that teenagers should stay and work in their hometown . Firstly , they could live near their relations and friends . Young people still reiceve support from their parents when they have troubles , therefore teenagers would not nervous or sad because of loneliness . Secondly , Teengers are able to develop their hometown . The country or city could not develop without young people and they have a duty to serve their countryside . Teenagers have a good ability so they would contribute a lot for their countryside .
On the other hand , it is understandable why the majority of young people want to find new challenge in other nations . On top of that , Young people would have more opportunity in modern and advanced country than their countryside . Developed countries have many big companies and large project , therefore young people easily find a work and earn a lot money .Furthermore , teenagers could learn diverse knowledge and spend many experience from foreign people . Inhabitant in developed nations often hard-working and have a special talent , young people would imitate and improve themselves daily.
In conclusion , there may be some reasons to support young people working abroad and facing a challenge. I strongly believe that this policy is not without drawsbacks and thus should not be implemented by the state.
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Write about the following topic Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge 56
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 56
- Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21115537849 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71447108264 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0477571537 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235862857485 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093241451069 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774611917653 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168413771384 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856898474297 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.