In this contemporary era, mass media plays an imperative role in our daily life. It is present in various forms like, television, radio and newspaper, it has great effect on people's thought. Withstanding, I totally agree with this assertion.
To begin with, mass media provides people knowledge about modern inventions, researches and education, which can help to broaden their horizons and think rational. They became aware about, what is happening around them and individuals get updates of distinct sections realted to their field. This in result rises their information and make them better in that particular job or subject. Moreover, media represent actual world, hardships faced by people and other environmental problems. This assist people to shape up their views. To illustrate, media telecast numerous campaigns and conferences from all over the globe, which influences people to think of these issues. Thus, it is beneficial as, people get good ideas form whole world only by sitting in front of television or by reading newspaper.
Besides this, motivational speaches con inspire children not to lose hope and work hard, when they listen to prominent personalities, who started from grass root level. They become more positive and always have same approach towards life. Additionaly, newspaper brings daily news in cheap price affordable by all, so it spread awearness and knowledge about nation. People can know new laws implemented and number of competition won by sports person. Hence, everyone can read about their country and show their views.
In conclusion, mass media has great effect on people's social and economical situation. It assist them to have different views and most of positive ones, so it is highly advantageous for nation and citizens.
- rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects like philosophy and history and only offer practical degree courses that maximize chances of employment To wh 91
- Many countries use fossil fuels such as coal or oil as the main sources of energy. However, in some countries the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. Do you think this a positive or negative development? 84
- Scientist have been warning for many years that to protect our environment we have to limit use of energy in our daily lives despite warning many people do not pay attention to this What are the reasons and how people can encourage to save environment 83
- Most people accept that we now live in globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development? 84
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, as for, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3835125448 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.726479737 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.598199869 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3529411765 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196449075766 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628236453523 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469877600174 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125208996285 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558165689053 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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