In this sophisticated era, crime rate has been rised immensely and distinctive decisions have been taken by governments to stop it. Whereas, giving longer prison sentence is one of them. Some people think it is better idea while other believe that there are alternative methods as well. Here, I shall scrutinise both sides of this assertion with my proper verdict at last.
To commense with, crime rate in contemporary world is one of the major problems faced internationally. So, longer prisions can be a solution to it as if most of criminals will be sent to prision for longer period, the crime rate will ultimately decrease. Moreover, if rules will be strict like longer prison sentences, people will be afraid of committing any crime. To illustrate, In Dubai rules are strict and crime rate is much lower, it can be a good example for rest of world. Thus, this idea can be tremendously successful.
Nonetheless, In prison criminals will meet other people like them so, instead of rehabilitation they will make new plans for crimes. And, after their relese they will still be criminals. Secondly, all crimes are not same so, it will be injustice to give same punishment for sever and small crimes as well. This eventually will lead to hostile environment ina nation. For instance, kidnapping and theft can never be same and its admonishment will also be different. Hence, some other method should be adopted .
In conclusion, long prison can be successful but only in some circumstances. So some alternative method should be there, else people will loose faith in justice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e been taken by governments to stop it. Whereas, giving longer prison sentence is one o...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r verdict at last. To commense with, crime rate in contemporary world is one ...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the criminals') or simply say ''most criminals''.
Suggestion: most of the criminals; most criminals
... prisions can be a solution to it as if most of criminals will be sent to prision for longer peri...
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Line 5, column 508, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nce, some other method should be adopted . In conclusion, long prison can be su...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ethod should be there, else people will loose faith in justice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00378787879 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8090379487 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5910284667 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7058823529 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168033120295 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637990873164 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575742343346 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119527916277 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465322087657 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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