It is commonly believed that children being the future of nation should be well mannered. However, now question arise, who should be accountable for their becoming noble members of society, either parents or schools. Here, both sides of this assertion will be scrutinised with my proper vedict at last.
To commence with, it is primary duty of guardians to teach young ones to be good members of community. First of all, they should, from their childhood, make them more ethical and moral by inducing values like respect and obedience. As, children learn by imitating their parents, therefore it becomes essential for parents behave properly. To illustrate, recent research has proved that the juvelines behavior depend mostly on parents and it was worse in the cases in which their relation was hostile, with constant arguements at home. Hence, procreates are responsible for developing them into respectful part of community.
Nevertheless, despite of parents teachers also plays an imperative part in kids life. As, in this busy world when both parents are working, children are highly dependent on them. Even, they spend four to five hours with teachers, which means a lot of time. Moreover, i schools children interact with teachers, students and other staff members, that develops various values in them such as sharing, friendly behavior and good habits. Consequently, this results in broadening their horizons and make them devoid of discrimination. For instance, young ones going to school are better in communication, conduct and are away from unacceptable ills of world. Deducing, not only parents but also schools are equally vital in childs growth.
In my opinion, as I aforementioned child cannot evolve without support of both guardians and schools. Thus, if any one of them is missing, young ones cannot be transformed into worthy members of ideal society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29431438127 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73016242564 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638795986622 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8627028657 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225677293437 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694254048068 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522090926982 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13869689983 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564383339277 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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