It is harsh reality that health of environment is degrading from last few decades. The natural surroundings have imperative role in our life, so it should be preserved, but humans are doing nothing to save it. However, there are some actions that can help nature to survive.
Admittedly, environment has provided us numerous benefits, but people have become selfish, they use to think only about themselves.
They like to buy more and throw more, that increases pressure on resources and ultimately will have devastating effects, which would not be corrected. Moreover, most of people are not awear of, what is happening to natural surrounding, so they are not willingly destroying it. To illustrate, in villages masses are illiterate, they dont even know about the damage they are doing. Hence, nature is essential for life and individuals should do some efforts to save it
Despite of all these reasons, there are some common solutions to this hardship. First of all, law-makers can launch aweraness programs, camps and campaigns, also they can make some strict rules and regulations. For instance, they can make it mandatory for every denizen to plant few trees in a month. Furthermore, media can help to make peple awear about repercussion that their neglence could have. They can start a specific show to promote healthy environment, that can have positive impact on every individual. Thus, environment is not only for humans but also for all creatures, so it should be saved.
In conclusion, nature has made a balance in which mankind have no right to make a change. So, all these solutions should be implimented as soon as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
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Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...olutions to this hardship. First of all, law-makers can launch aweraness programs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11070110701 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77151496286 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594095940959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9477690562 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245540219172 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833120079401 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744263142416 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133313998795 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521176074454 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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