Media affect people life significantly. what impact on the society . is it negative or positive for people. explain with your own opinion and examples.
Media is called the mirror of society. Presently, media plays a magnificent role in masses life .Here,i would like to account it's positive impacts on society.
There are manifold positives of media. First and foremost, through media people can not only aware from misshappings but also amuse themselves.To illustrate. People like to watch various crime related programs such as Satyamev jayat, crime patrol, and many more and these programs aware people about the surrounding environment and they can get some useful ideas for safety.Apart from it, there are many entertainment programs where people can reduce the stress of life by watching programs. Thus the role of media in everyone 's life is important.
Numerous benefits can be mentioned.people can keep themselves up to date through newspaper such as amitab bachan
Tell the parents about polio drops.moreover, some people are unable to raise their voice for their rights in front of society but media can easily depicts the problems of people in front of government so that government take some useful steps for society and people. Therefore, the importance of media can not be neglected.
To sum up, undeniably, some unauthorized person use media in negative ways. However, still I believe that the positives outweigh the negatives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, as for, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31553398058 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83560389487 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.104572308 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236603249773 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102191121894 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038002975793 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122111550572 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479581170983 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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