Media and newspaper show vulgar crimes on news, which cause fear among the people and provoke the culprits. some people therefore think that, the crime news on TV should not be broadcasted. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Presently, several crime rates go up around the world. Certain humans argue that crime news should not be uploaded on television. I agree with that statement and I will explain why should not be given crime news on television.
To commence with, a host of people do not focus on their business. When they show crime news on live television. Owing to, many mankind thinks that if we may do crime so that we easily get more money than business. Furthermore, people can not crimes alone, suppose that they need more people to make a plan then they may do the big crime. For instant, in India, there were ten terrorists attacked on Tajmahal in the 2011 year and they belonged to ISI terrorist group because they were provided money by them. To sum up, if crime news should not make big broadcast hence people may not follow that.
On the other hand, the crime news may impact children then that might become big news. Moreover, while children show that big crime news, that scares that time and they might not focus on their study. For example, a plethora of children watches crime news therefore they would like to do that and that is followed by them, after they may become criminals. The last but not least, that influence does not put on there so crime news should not be made the big broadcast.
To conclude, a host of crime may make fear among the human and provoke the culprits. Although crime news must not be uploaded on the media and newspaper, that impact becomes a big thing in the future.
- Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government while other believe that individuals should be responsible for their own health Discuss both these views and give your opinion 56
- Media and newspaper show vulgar crimes on news which cause fear among the people and provoke the culprits some people therefore think that the crime news on TV should not be broadcasted To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people belive that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world s fuel resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views 67
- Some people belive that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world s fuel resources To what extent do you agree or disagree 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... people do not focus on their business. When they show crime news on live television...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun mankind seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much mankind', 'a good deal of mankind'.
Suggestion: much mankind; a good deal of mankind
...rime news on live television. Owing to, many mankind thinks that if we may do crime so that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56088560886 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20505564418 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516605166052 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9679979509 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36704662769 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14872906301 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623446004627 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240583138727 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00506778903036 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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