Some people think that the government should make university education free for
all students, regardless of their financial situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, pupils would like to learn in the university. Few people argue that the bureaucrats should give free education for all learners, according to their financial situation. According to me, I agree with this topic and I will give reason for the university free education for all students.
If the bureaucrats give free university education for all students so pupils learn new from university and that impact on the technology. Because in this era, plethora of students do not have more money as well as they would like to learn something new so that students are taught by the university after study, if they choose IT so they make new technology and that impact on the country. Moreover, pupils learn from university and they teach other students on social media platform.
Furthermore, while the government give free education for university students hence that impact on political. For example, in our country two party of government such as BJP and Congress, if BJP gives free education so people think, that government provide free education for our child, thus they would like to vote them in the elections. Finally, wealthy people may join big university, but poor people can not join university because they doe not have money as well as they become more poor.
On the other hand, Although government should not give free education because if they provide free so that ecological effect on the country and the government earning may close from the university.
To conclude, the bureaucrats should be gave free education for all university students. Which pupils belong to poor family so they join and get more knowledge from the university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...at students are taught by the university after study, if they choose IT so they ...
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...s belong to poor family so they join and get more knowledge from the university.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08759124088 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6552292596 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43795620438 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0229839518 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326703944013 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147606771757 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095686527779 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19995526102 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571416349912 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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